How to Write a Professional Email
Traci Johnson
Created on October 14, 2022
This interactive course covers the different types of professional emails and the methods in which to construct them, as well as professional formatting and language conventions.
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Transcript
INFORMATIVE
An informative email is a an email that is relaying information to the recipient. The information can cover a myriad of things:
- Announcing a promotion, event, or news
- engagement
- new baby
- a birthday
- Information about a policy change
- Delivering a resignation notice
REQUEST-AND-REPLY
A request-and-reply email is an email that is requesting something of the recipient. The request can cover a myriad of things:
- Requesting a service
- Asking a question or questions that need answered
- Requesting information
- about a job description
- about a product
- feedback
CONFIRMATION
A confirmation email is a an email that is confirming something. This can cover a myriad of things:
- Confirming a sale for a product or service
- Confirming a reservation and its details
- Confirming general information
- hiring information
- personal information
Definition
Using the direct method, the email sender will construct the email in a way that gets directly 'to the point'.
Purpose
The direct method of email-writing is used in cases such as the following:
- The recipient is already 'in-the-know' in relation to the email's content.
- The email contains content that will be viewed as 'neutral' or 'positive'.
- The information in the email will be well-received.
Structure
- Main point/request (news or request)
- Background or context (reason, details, information)
- Closing (clarification, action, or friendly remark)
Examples
- Making a simple request (positive or neutral)
- Giving directions, instructions, or orders
- Requesting an action (positive or neutral)
Definition
Using the indirect method, the email sender will construct the email in a way that 'builds up' to the point.
Purpose
The indirect method of email-writing is used in cases such as the following:
- The recipient is not already 'in-the-know' in relation to the email's content.
- The email contains content that will be viewed as 'negative'.
- The information in the email will not be well-received.
Structure
- Background or context (buffer and reason)
- Main point/request (bad news or neutral news)
- Closing (redirect)
Examples
- Employment or promotion rejection
- Notice of a beloved event being cancelled
- Notice of pay cuts or cancelled bonuses
- A product or service is not available
Professional Language - Subject Line
TITLE CASE EXAMPLES
- Request for Further Information
- Interest in Supervisor Position
- Promotion Announcement
- Resignation Letter
- Sales Meeting Details
SENTENCE CASE EXAMPLES
- Additional information is needed for your file
- Congratulations on your promotion!
- Falling short of reaching your sales goals? Please read
Professional Language - Greeting
TITLE CASE EXAMPLES
- Good morning/afternoon, evening,
- Dr./Mr./Ms./Mrs. Name,
- Greetings,
SENTENCE CASE EXAMPLES
- To whom it may concern,
- I hope this email finds you well,
- Allow me to introduce myself,
Professional Language - Body Paragraphs
GENERAL TIPS
In professional writing, use full, complete sentences, properly spelling all words. Do not use text speak, slang, or contractions.
TEXT SPEAK EXAMPLES | SLANG EXAMPLES | CONTRACTION EXAMPLES |
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FIRST SENTENCE EXAMPLES
- My name is _____, and I am emailing to inform you of _____.
- Allow me to introduce myself; my name is _____, and I am emailing to _____.
- I hope you are doing well. / I hope this email finds you well.
- I am reaching out because/due to _____.
- I would like to check in regarding _____.
- As discussed during our phone call, _____.
- It has come to my knowledge _____.
- Can you provide me with an update on _____?
- Following our last meeting, _____. / Per our last meeting, _____.
- It is great to hear from you.
- Thank you for your quick response.
- Thank you for reaching out.
- It is with great excitement that I announce _____.
- Please join me in congratulating _____ on his/her/their promotion to _____.
LAST SENTENCE EXAMPLES
- Thank you for your time/consideration.
- Thank you once again for your assistance in this matter.
- Thank you for understanding.
- Thank you for your continued support.
- I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
- Your cooperation in this matter is much appreciated.
- Please do not hesitate to reach out.
- Please respond with any questions or concerns.
- If I can be of assistance, please do not hesitate to ask.
- Please respond with further information at your earliest convenience.
- We hope that we may continue to rely on your loyalty/assistance/cooperation.
- Your immediate attention to this matter is much appreciated.
- Please advise.
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Professional Language - Sign-off
EXAMPLES
- Best regards,
- Warm regards,
- Respectfully,
- Thank you,
- With gratitude,
- Awaiting your response,
- Thank you for your consideration,
- Thank you in advance,
- With much appreciation,
- Cordially,
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Direct Informative Email
STRUCTURE
- Subject
- Short, concise
- Meaningful, informative
- Title or Sentence Case as appropriate
- Greeting
- Short, concise
- Title or Sentence Case as appropriate
- Opening Paragraph
- Comparable to an Introduction Paragraph
- First, state the point/main piece of inoformation/topic
- Then provide background information
- Middle Paragraphs
- Comparable to body paragraphs
- Provide any necessary details to support your main purpose
- Use quantitative data where possible
- Closing Paragraph
- Comparable to a closing paragraph
- Final details, remarks, reminders
- Sign-off
- Short, concise
- Capitalize first word, comma
EXAMPLE
Direct Request and Reply Email
STRUCTURE
- Subject
- Short, concise
- Meaningful, informative
- Title or Sentence Case as appropriate
- Greeting
- Short, concise
- Title or Sentence Case as appropriate
- Opening Paragraph
- Comparable to an Introduction Paragraph
- First, state your request
- Then, provide background information
- Middle Paragraphs
- Comparable to body paragraphs
- Support your request with facts, details, examples
- Use quantitative data
- Closing Paragraph
- Comparable to a closing paragraph
- Final details, remarks, reminders
- Sign-off
- Short, concise
- Capitalize first word, comma
EXAMPLE
Direct Confirmation Email
STRUCTURE
- Subject
- Short, concise
- Meaningful, informative
- Title or Sentence Case as appropriate
- Greeting
- Short, concise
- Title or Sentence Case as appropriate
- Opening Paragraph
- Comparable to an Introduction Paragraph
- State the purpose
- Express gratitude
- Middle Paragraphs
- Comparable to body paragraphs
- Provide necessary information
- Detail reminders
- Closing Paragraph
- Final details
- Reminders and instructions
- Sign-off
- Short, concise
- Capitalize first word, comma
EXAMPLE
Indirect Informative Email
STRUCTURE
- Subject
- Short, concise
- Meaningful, informative
- Title or Sentence Case as appropriate
- Greeting
- Short, concise
- Title or Sentence Case as appropriate
- Opening Paragraph
- Comparable to an Introduction Paragraph
- First, provide background information
- End with the point/main piece of information/topic
- Middle Paragraphs
- Comparable to body paragraphs
- Provide any necessary details to support your main purpose
- Use quantitative data where possible
- Closing Paragraph
- Comparable to a closing paragraph
- Final details, remarks, reminders
- Sign-off
- Short, concise
- Capitalize first word, comma
EXAMPLE
Indirect Request and Reply Email
STRUCTURE
- Subject
- Short, concise
- Meaningful, informative
- Title or Sentence Case as appropriate
- Greeting
- Short, concise
- Title or Sentence Case as appropriate
- Opening Paragraph
- Comparable to an Introduction Paragraph
- First, provide background information
- End with your request
- Middle Paragraphs
- Comparable to body paragraphs
- Support your request with facts, details, examples
- Use quantitative data
- Closing Paragraph
- Comparable to a closing paragraph
- Final details, remarks, reminders
- Sign-off
- Short, concise
- Capitalize first word, comma
EXAMPLE
Indirect Confirmation Email
STRUCTURE
- Subject
- Short, concise
- Meaningful, informative
- Title or Sentence Case as appropriate
- Greeting
- Short, concise
- Title or Sentence Case as appropriate
- Opening Paragraph
- Comparable to an Introduction Paragraph
- Express gratitude
- State the purpose
- Middle Paragraphs
- Comparable to body paragraphs
- Provide necessary information
- Detail reminders
- Closing Paragraph
- Final details
- Reminders and instructions
- Sign-off
- Short, concise
- Capitalize first word, comma
EXAMPLE
*An indirect confirmation email would be rare to use.
YES, SURE
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CORRECT!
The indirect method of email structure is appropriate here as the email's contents are 'negative'. It is necessary to build up to the point with background information if the email will be poorly received.
NOT QUITE
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b
NOT QUITE
CORRECT!
The direct method of email structure is appropriate here as the email's contents are 'positive'. It is not necessary to build up to the point if the email will be well-received or neutrally received.
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b
NOT QUITE
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It is not necessary to capitalize every word in the greeting. Only the first word and proper nouns should be capitalized.
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b
NOT QUITE
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Do not indent body paragraphs in a professional email.
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b
NOT QUITE
CORRECT!
Always use professional language in professional emails.
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