Tonijeva priča

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Toni's story

Tonijeva priča

Tara Ćibarić, Mihael Palatinuš, Bartol Buterin, Lea Odak, Luka Matošević, 7.b

Toni ne odlazi u park

Toni odlazi u park

Bila je to mirna večer. Tonijevi roditelji otišli su na večeru, tako da je Toni ostao sam doma. Ideja da je tako kasno sam doma, bila je pomalo zastrašujuća, ali nekako se snašao. Igrao je igrice u svojoj sobi dok nije čuo kako zvoni mobitel u dnevnom boravku. Bio je to nepoznat broj. Podigao je slušalicu te znatiželjno pitao: „Tko je?“ U prvom trenutku nije čuo ničiji glas, nego samo nečije duboko disanje. „Tko je?“ ponovio je. Duboki mu je glas odgovorio: „Dođi sutra u lokalni park u 7 ujutro prije škole.“ Toni je prestrašeno poklopio slušalicu i zabrinuto razmišljao što će napraviti.

Nakon toga...

Toni tu noć uopće nije spavao. U isto vrijeme samo se htio sakriti i nikada više ne izaći iz kuće, ali njegov instinkt govorio mu je da dođe u park jer tko zna kakve bi sve mogle biti posljedice. Već je bilo rano jutro pa se spremio. Krenuo je u park jako zabrinut. Zbunjeno je u parkiću tražio misterioznog čovjeka koji ga je jučer navečer nazvao. Jedino što je pronašao bilo je pismo na kojem je pisalo: „Za Tonija, otvori ako se usudiš.“ Ovo ga je sve skupa počelo zabrinjavati. Što ako se nađe u nevolji? Hrabro je otvorio pismo i pročitao: „Hvala što si me poslušao. Nakon škole, kada dođeš doma, pogledaj u treću ladicu. Imam iznenađenje za tebe.“ Toni je zamišljen došao do autobusne stanice i tijekom vožnje do škole nije mogao prestati misliti o tom događaju.

Nakon toga...

Odlučio je ignorirati pismo i otići u školu kao svaki dan. U školi je na svojoj klupi pronašao pismo u kojem je pisalo: „Vidim da me nisi poslušao. Kada dođeš doma, pogledaj u treću ladicu. Čeka te veliko iznenađenje.“ Toni se prestrašio. Najradije bi cijeli dan proveo u školi. Na putu do kuće zabrinuto je gledao kroz prozor.

Tisuću misli prošlo mu je kroz glavu. Na računalo mu je došla poruka od nepoznatog pošiljatelja. U poruci je bio link za videozapis. Toni je kliknuo link koji ga je odveo na YouTube. Tonijeve su se oči raširile i čeljust mu je pala do poda. Na snimci je ugledao sebe kako se vraća iz škole!

Toniju je bilo dosta svega

Toni se istinski uplašio

Na ulazu u kuću Toni je polako otvorio vrata. Drhtale su mu ruke, srce mu je glasno i brzo kucalo, nikad se nije ovako jako bojao. Odjednom mu je jakna zavibrirala. Od straha je malo poskočio. Mama mu je poslala poruku da će ona i tata kasnije doći doma zato što trebaju u dućan. Potrčao je u sobu i pogledao što se krije u njegovoj ladici. Pronašao je pismo, opet. Otvorio ga je. U njemu je pisalo: „Pogledaj poruke na svom računalu.“

(riješi anagram i saznaj što je pisalo u poruci)

poznate oči pod maskom

nepoznatu osobu s bijelom maskom

Toni je isključio računalo, zatvorio prozor, zaključao vrata svoje sobe te se sakrio u svoj krevet i navukao posteljinu preko glave. Glasno je disao i oči su mu bile staklenaste. Mobitel mu je opet zavibrirao. Pomislio je da mu mama šalje poruku da su ona i tata blizu, ali bio je u krivu. Dobio je poruku s nepoznatog broja. U poruci je pisalo: Toniju je bilo dosta skrivanja te je hrabro odgovorio: „Nađemo se za pola sata u lokalnom parkiću. Moramo razgovarati.“ Pola sata je prošlo i Toni je čekao u parkiću da se ukaže ta misteriozna osoba. Osjetio je nečiju ruku na svom ramenu. Kada se okrenuo ugledao je...

instagram profil

facebook profil

Bilo mu je dosta. Nije mu se dalo više skrivati. Odgovorio je na poruku: „Što želiš od mene?“ Nepoznatoj osobi nije trebalo dugo da odgovori: „Želim da se sutra nađemo u muškoj svlačionici za tjelesni u 10 sati.“ Tonija je zbunila ova poruka. Opet je tisuću misli prolazilo njegovom glavom. No odlučio je suočiti se s misterioznim čovjekom. Možda će onda, napokon, dobiti odgovore na svoja pitanja. Sljedeći dan ušao je u svlačionicu za tjelesni i ugledao je...

Toni je zabrinutim tonom rekao: „Zašto si mi ovo učinio? Jako si me prestrašio!“ Filip ga je pogledao žalosnim pogledom: „Oprosti, Toni, bilo mi je dosadno i mislio sam da će biti smiješno.“ Toni je razočarano gledao u Filipa. Potjerao ga je iz parka. Nakon nekoliko minuta Toni je krenuo kući. Kada je napokon stigao, upalio je svjetla i vidio...

iznenađenje!

Okrenuo se i oči su mu ugledale čovjeka s bijelom maskom na licu. Maska je imala dvije rupe za oči. Toni je odmah prepoznao dječaka ispod maske kada je ugledao svijetloplave oči. Znao je puno ljudi s plavim očima, ali njegove su se nekako razlikovale od ostalih. „Filipe, ne trebaš se više pretvarati, znam da si ti!“ Dječak svijetloplavih očiju skinuo je svoju masku, popravio svoju crnu kosu te rekao: „Ah, otkrio si me. Što si mi htio reći?“

„Zašto si to napravio? Sve ovo?“ uzviknuo je Toni. Filip je zbunjenim pogledom promucao: „P-pa bilo mi je m-m-malo...dosadno...pa sam mislio da će ovo biti d-dobra spačka."Toni je potjerao Filipa iz parka. Mogla se vidjeti Filipova crna kosa iz daljine kada je odlazio. Toni je nekoliko minuta nakon Filipova odlaska krenuo kući. Bio je ljutit i tužan. No kada je stigao doma, ugledao je...

iznenađenje!

Toni je ugledao osobu pod maskom. Maska je imala rupice za oči. Kroz rupice su se vidjele svijetloplave oči. Toni je znao puno ljudi s plavim očima pa mu je bilo teško prepoznati tko je ispod maske. „Tko si ti?“ upitao je, ali osoba je samo gledala u Tonija. Odjednom je skinuo masku i rekao: „To sam ja!“ Bio je to Tonijev prijatelj Filip. „Jesam li te prestrašio?“ upitao je Filip.

(klikni na ikonu)

Čeljust mu je pala do poda. Oči su mu se raširile dok je gledao sve ružne, zle i zlonamjerne komentare o sebi. Toni se jako naljutio i odlučio to prijaviti svojim roditeljima.

Nakon toga...

Ušao je u svlačionicu i ugledao mobitel nasred sobe. Na mobitelu je bio link za Facebook stranicu te ga je Toni znatiželjno kliknuo.

(klikni na ikonu)

Počeo se znojiti kada je ugledao da se netko pretvara da je on. Toni nije ni imao Instagram, a kamoli ostavljao ovakve odvratne komentare. Odlučio je nazvati svog prijatelja Filipa i pitati ga za pomoć. Nakon nekoliko dana, pokušavajući otkriti tko objavljuje takve ružne komentare, Filipu je bilo dosta. Tijekom obiteljskog ručka Filip je sve ispričao svojim roditeljima i sestri. Filipovi roditelji znali su da je situacija ozbiljna te su nazvali Tonijeve roditelje i obavijestili ih o ovoj situaciji.

Nakon toga...

Ušao je u svlačionicu i ugledao mobitel nasred sobe. Na mobitelu je bio link za Instagram te ga je Toni začuđeno otvorio.

Filip

Toni

Nakon toga...

Toni se jako naljutio na Filipa zato što je rekao sve svojim roditeljima, ali nakon nekog vremena shvatio je da je to bilo najbolje.

Na kraju...

Otvorio je vrata i ugledao svoje prijatelje, svoje roditelje i Filipa kako su zajedno viknuli:Tonijevo lice ukrasio je smiješak. Uz sve je ovo zaboravio da mu je rođendan. Dolazio je od osobe do osobe i zahvalio im na ovom iznenađenju. Došao je do Filipa i ljutito rekao: „Mislio sam da me netko stvarno uhodi, a ti si to meni zapravo pripremao rođendansko iznenađenje!“ Filip ga je pogledao i rekao mu je: „Samo sam želio najbolju rođendansku zabavu za svog prijatelja.“ Oba dječaka prasnula su u smijeh te je Toni sarkastično rekao: „Ti si najbolji uhoditelj ikad.“

Luka

Na kraju...

Tonijevi roditelji odmah su htjeli poduzeti nešto. Nazvali su školu i obavijestili ravnateljicu o ovoj groznoj situaciji. Ravnateljica je odmah otišla u Tonijev razred na sastanak. Ravnateljica je započela ispitivanje te se jedan dječak hitro javio. Dubokim je glasom rekao:Ravnateljica je prozvala Luku te se visoki dečko s crnim očima i crnom kosom polako ustao. Uzela mu je mobitel i otkrila istinu. On je bio onaj koji je to radio Toniju. Toni ga je ljutito pogledao. Luka se slatko nasmiješio te krenuo za ravnateljicom u njezin ured. Nakon nekoliko sati Toni i njegovi roditelji bili su obaviješteni da je Luka dobio ukor. Ogroman kamen pao je s Tonijeva srca, a Filip ga je veselo zagrlio.

Kraj

KLIKNI OVDJE I PROČITAJ/STVORI PRIČU S DRUGAČIJIM ZAPLETOM!

Cijelu večer svi su se zabavljali na Tonijevoj zabavi. U jednom trenutku Filip pogleda sat i kaže: „Minuta je do 12, Toni, uskoro ti je pravi rođendan!“ Točno u ponoć svi su zagrlili Tonija. Filip je stajao ispred njega i veselo se nasmiješio.

Kraj

KLIKNI OVDJE I PROČITAJ/STVORI PRIČU S DRUGAČIJIM ZAPLETOM!

Filip i Toni odlučili su proslaviti te su otišli k Toniju. Filip je dobio dozvolu od roditelja da prespava kod Tonija. Dvojica dječaka igrali su igrice do ponoći dok nisu odlučili ići spavati. A onda...Odjednom je zazvonio mobitel u dnevnom boravku. Filip i Toni nervozno su se pogledali.

Toni doesn't go to park

Toni goes to park

It was a quiet evening. Tony's parents went to dinner, so Tony was left home alone. The idea of being home alone so late was a little frightening, but somehow he managed. He was playing games in his room until he heard a cell phone rang in the living room. It was an unknown number. He picked up the phone and asked curiously: ‘Who is it?’ At first he heard no one's voice, only someone's deep breathing. ‘Who is it?’ he repeated. A deep voice replied: ‘Come to the local park tomorrow at 7 a.m. before school.’ Toni hung up in fright and wondered anxiously what to do.

After that...

Toni didn't sleep that night. At the same time he just wanted to hide and never get out of the house again, but his instinct told him to come to the park because who knows what the consequences might be. It was already early morning so he got ready. He headed to the park very worried. Confused, he searched the park for a mysterious man who had called him last night. The only thing he found was a letter that said: ‘For Toni, open if you dare.’. All this began to worry him. What if he gets in trouble? He bravely opened the letter and read: ‘Thank you for following my advice. After school, when you get home, look in the third drawer. I have a surprise for you.’. Toni thoughtfully came to the bus stop and while driving to school he couldn't stop thinking about the event.

After that...

He decided to ignore the letter and go to school like every day. At school, he found a letter on his desk that said: ‘I see you didn’t listen to me. When you get home, look in the third drawer. A big surprise is awaiting you.’ Toni was startled. He would rather spend the whole day at school. On the way home, he anxiously looked out the window...

Toni has had enough

Toni was truly scared

At the entrance to the house, Toni slowly opened the door. His hands were shaking, his heart was beating loudly and fast, he had never been so afraid. Suddenly his jacket vibrated. He jumped a little out of fear. Mom sent him a message that she and Dad would come home later because they needed to go to the store. He ran into the room and looked at what was hiding in his drawer. He found the letter, again. He opened it. It said: ‘Look at the messages on your computer.’ A thousand thoughts went through his head. He received a message on his computer from an unknown sender. There was a video link in the message. Toni clicked the link that took him to YouTube. Toni's eyes widened and his jaw dropped to the floor. In the video, he saw himself returning from school!

The bright-blue-eyed boy took off his mask, fixed his black hair and said: …'Ah, you figured me out. What did you want to tell me?' Toni said to him in a worried tone: 'Why did you do this to me? You really scared me!' Filip looked at him with a sad look: 'I'm sorry, Toni, I was bored and I thought this would be funny.' Toni looked at Filip in disappointment. He told him to leave the park. After a few minutes, Toni went home. When he finally came, he turned on the lights and...

he saw...

He turned around and he saw a man with a white mask on hisface. The mask had two eye holes. Toni immediatley recognized the boy under the mask when he saw a pair of bright blue eyes under it. He knew many people with blue eyes, but his were somehow different from the others. 'Filip, you don't have to pretend anymore, I know it's you!'

(solve the anagram)

...a familiarize eyes underneath the mask

...unknown person with the white mask

Toni turned off the computer, closed the window, locked his bedroom door, hid in his bed and pulled the sheets over his head. He was breathing loudly and his eyes were glassy. His phone vibrated again. He thought it was his mom sending him a message that she and his dad are almost home, but he was wrong. He got a message from an unknown number. The message said: Toni had enough of hiding so he bravely responded: 'We will meet up in half an hour in the local park. We have to talk.' Half an hour has passed and Toni was waiting in the park waiting for this mysterious person to show up. He felt somebody's hand on his shoulder. When he turned around he saw…

...an instagram profil

...a facebook profile

He had enough. He was done with hiding. He replied to the message saying: 'What do you want from me?' It didn't take long to get an answer: 'I want us to meet up in the boys P.E. lockeroom at 10 o'clock.' This message confused Toni. Thousands of thoughts went through his head, again. But he decided to finally face this mysterious person. Maybe then he will finally get the answers to his quesions. The next day, he went into the P.E. lockeroom and saw…

'Did I scare you?' Filip asked. 'Why did you do this? All of this?' Toni shouted. Filip stuttered with a confused look on his face: 'W-well, I was a l-l-little… bored… so I though this would be a g-good prank.' Toni told Filip to leave the park. Filip's black hair could be seen in the distance as he was leaving. Toni started to walk back home a few minutes after Filip left. He was angry and sad. But when he got home...

he saw...

Toni saw a person wearing a mask. The mask had two eye holes. A pair of bright blue eyes were visible through the eye holes. Toni knew many people with blue eyes, so it was hard for him to recognize who was under the mask. 'Who are you?' he asked him, but the person just stared at Toni. All of a sudden he took off his mask and said: 'It's me!' It was Toni's friend Filip.

(click here)

His jaw dropped to the floor and his eyes widened while he was looking at ugly comments about himself. The comments were very mean. Toni was angry and decided to report the situation to his parents.His jaw dropped to the floor and his eyes widened while he was looking at ugly comments about himself. The comments were very mean. Toni was angry and decided to report the situation to his parents.

After that...

He went into the locker room a saw a mobile phone in the middle of the room. On the mobile phone was a link to a Facebook page so Toni opened it with curiosity.

(click here)

He started sweating when he saw somebody pretending to be him. Toni didn’t even have Instagram and he never left such repulsive comments. He decided to call his friend Filip and ask him for help. After a few days trying to find out who the writer of the comments was, Filip had enough. During a family lunch Filip told everything to his parents and his sister. Filip’s parents knew that this was a serious situation so they called Toni’s parents and told them everything.

After that ...

He went into the locker room a saw a mobile phone in the middle of the room. On the mobile phone was an Instagram link so Toni wonderingly opened it.

Filip

Toni

After that...

Tony got very angry with Filip because he told everything to his parents, but after some time he realized that it was for the best.

At the end...

He opened the door and saw his friends, his parents and Filip shouting :Tony's face was adorned with a smile. With all this, he forgot it was his birthday. He came from person to person and thanked them for this surprise. He came to Filip and angrily asked: ‘I thought someone was really stalking me, and you were actually preparing a birthday surprise for me !?’. Filip looked at him and said: ‘I have just wanted the best birthday party for my friend.’ Both boys burst into laughter and Toni sarcastically says: ‘You're the best stalker ever.’

Luka

At the end...

Toni's parents immediately wanted to do something. They called the school and informed the principal about this awful situation. The headmistress immediately went to Toni's class for a meeting. The headmistress began questioning and one boy answered quickly. He said in a deep voice: The headmistress called out Luka, and the tall boy with black eyes and black hair slowly stood up. She took his mobile phone and revealed the truth. He was the one who did it to Toni. Toni looked at him angrily. Luka smiled and followed the headmistress into her office. After a few hours Toni and his parents were informed that Luka had received a reprimand. A large stone fell from Toni's heart, and Filip hugged him cheerfully.

The End

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Everyone had fun all night at Toni's party. At one point Filip looked at his watch and said: ‘It's a minute to 12, Toni, it's your real birthday soon!’ At midnight, everyone hugged Toni. Filip stood in front of him and smiled happily.

The End

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Filip and Tony decided to celebrate and went to Toni’s house. Filip got a permission from his parents to sleep at Toni’s house. The two boys were playing games until midnight when they decided to go to sleep. And then...Suddenly, the mobile phone in the living room rang. Filip and Toni looked at each other nervously...